What do you think of this character?

Sounds like you just described Martha Stewart! Which is fine, but a bio does not tell a story. This information is important in establishing your character but as they stand right now, you have a basic description, you could not put this on the back of your book and expect this to entice someone to read it. What will she be doing and why? Give us a storyline, what will she be doing that I would want to read about. We could write a million bio's but without a storyline they are nothing.